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Sam, Thank you.
I prefer to use dialog to convey most of my description. I remember reading other books where the description detracted from the story. I wish to avoid that detracting type of description.
Kermit
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Kermit1941
on August 25, 2011 at 4:10 PM
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:) Thank you.
Kermit
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Kermit1941
on August 25, 2011 at 4:06 PM
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I like how you handle dialog! And the answer was merely a simple invitation at the end, too! Well done! sam
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sam444
on August 23, 2011 at 3:36 PM
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ñ Entertaining ensemble characters address social culture well. BC-A, Bill’s R{{st
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BC-A
on August 23, 2011 at 5:08 AM
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