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                Thank you, CHIFFCHAFF...for making me feel welcomed
  
                
                    posted by
                    Whisperer4U
                     on August 19, 2011 at 5:02 PM
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                Whispers thank you it is nice that you are around
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:51 AM
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                FS Well it is not to late for you.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:50 AM
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                Well perhaps I was disturbed a liitle LIon. Thank you.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:49 AM
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                Thank you Malcom my brother

 is using my Kindle but I mean to read your poems as soon as I get it back.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:47 AM
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                Well Jay nothing is easy it is a bit of a struggle at times, but thank you
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:45 AM
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                    Re: CHIFFCHAFF
                
                   Wilery.  Don't worry Old chap a lot of us will not admit our sins.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:44 AM
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                    Re: Re: I totally agree with Utahjay.....I know that I cannot write this well.
                
                Yes Kabu but you can always say I have a headache darling you shall have the first free copy.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:41 AM
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                    Re: Well said and beautiful sentiments
                
                Thank you Ariala hope that you are all right.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 11:39 AM
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                    Well said and beautiful sentiments
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Ariala
                     on August 19, 2011 at 8:57 AM
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                    Re: "as always, puddles of dreams thwart pogress"....
                
                Thank you Rumor, perhaps when I get older 
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 7:28 AM
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                Right Sam we have to be dramatic sometimes.
  
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 7:26 AM
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                Thank you Shobana, what does that mean
   
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 7:25 AM
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                Good luck Bill the time to worry is when they will not go on

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                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on August 19, 2011 at 7:24 AM
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                    CHIFFCHAFF
                
                ® Your poems are so good that my  computer froze, giving you a click sir. Actually they want to scan for software  updates to make my computer run better. I’m not prepared sir. BC-A, Bill’s R{{st
  
                
                    posted by
                    BC-A
                     on August 19, 2011 at 1:32 AM
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                Excellently written CC - kudos to you.
  
                
                    posted by
                    shobana
                     on August 18, 2011 at 10:34 PM
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                I think we long for a truer description and at times not matter the situation! I loved this line to no end:
 Each day was squeezed like a lemon for a new sensation.  BRAVO! sam 
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on August 18, 2011 at 8:36 PM
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                    "as always, puddles of dreams thwart pogress"....
                
                C.C..its a shame that that is often what happens to our dreams, our hopes...vivid images as always, and I agree with what's already been said - you should seriously look into having your poetry published..


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                    posted by
                    Rumor
                     on August 18, 2011 at 5:38 PM
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                    Re: I totally agree with Utahjay.....I know that I cannot write this well.
                
                I mean what a priveledge to own your book...if you would only publish.  
                
                    posted by
                    Kabu
                     on August 18, 2011 at 4:02 PM
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                    CHIFFCHAFF
                
                "Never certain one moves believing the choice lasts forever." That line really drew me in and there was almost something of the guilty Catholic brought alive. Hmmmmm 
  
                
                    posted by
                    WileyJohn
                     on August 18, 2011 at 2:40 PM
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                CHIFFCHAFF, your poetic words, continue to inspire and provoke me
  
                
                    posted by
                    Whisperer4U
                     on August 18, 2011 at 2:18 PM
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                There were times when I wondered if I could have been better prepared...  
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on August 18, 2011 at 11:20 AM
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                Oh my CC, you have out done even yourself with this and set the goal even higher. For me this is your best work , a wonderful poem, and I suppose the best I can say, the highest complement I can give, is that this is the way I wish I could write. I think many will agree.
  Now I must take a nap.
  
                
                    posted by
                    UtahJay
                     on August 18, 2011 at 8:59 AM
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                    I particularly
                
                enjoyed the last verse  
                
                    posted by
                    malcolm
                     on August 18, 2011 at 8:55 AM
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                wow, that is some incredible imagery.  Loved this poem and feel a little disturbed by it at the same time.    
                
                    posted by
                    lionreign
                     on August 18, 2011 at 8:45 AM
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