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I liked biting at the heart as though a red apple, it truly impacted the imagery! sam
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sam444
on August 17, 2011 at 12:43 PM
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You just get better all the time.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 16, 2011 at 9:33 AM
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Thank you abaneriee, sometimes one presses the right buttons.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 8:05 AM
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Hi Jay thank you, hope you are OK.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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Re: floating free wondering too how this can be...how you can write such
I know Kabu watch this space. I need that spell even if it is a potato spell.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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Good on you Wiley it is the best way to go.
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C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 8:00 AM
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Well that is the question FS . perhaps you will solve it one day.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 8:00 AM
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Thank you Whispers you can always criticize if you feel provoked.
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C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 7:59 AM
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Thank you Justi if I had I would send you one I just used to write them in my mind mostly
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C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 7:57 AM
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Cheers Lion
posted by
C_C_T
on August 16, 2011 at 7:55 AM
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Another great poem - nicely done
posted by
lionreign
on August 16, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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This is brilliant. This ability to express such deep thoughts, desires, fulfillments and in such beautiful words is not known today. We have such stuff as rap music, oh my. Do you have any poetry books out? Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on August 16, 2011 at 2:04 AM
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Your words always, have such depth of meaning...they really are provoking
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 15, 2011 at 10:29 PM
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I have wondered many a time how it can all be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 15, 2011 at 4:35 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Love and believing in the bliss of it all, wonderful poem that I enjoyed because I'm a believer too.
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WileyJohn
on August 15, 2011 at 1:27 PM
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floating free wondering too how this can be...how you can write such
brilliant poetry.
i can't release you from the bonds of Mary Rose....she just winks a wicked eye and runs her wee tongue across her lips...she's a minx and i don't have the spell to help.....she came to me from the UK just recently so she has had her smile on you for a long time.
posted by
Kabu
on August 15, 2011 at 12:05 PM
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Another wonderful and timely poem CC.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 15, 2011 at 10:32 AM
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I was swept off my feet reading this poem. Superbly well done, my friend. Kudos!
posted by
anib
on August 15, 2011 at 10:29 AM
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