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Right Lion now and again one it happens as you know.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2011 at 8:11 AM
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Thank you Whispers what can I say.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2011 at 8:10 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Right Bill perhaps it could have been, but or the luck of the draw.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2011 at 8:08 AM
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Thank you Taps and I did not change it at all.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2011 at 8:06 AM
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wow, that is really quite intense and complex. I like the perception in this
posted by
lionreign
on August 9, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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I really find your style of writing very stimulating...and poetically beautiful
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 9, 2011 at 12:28 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
T So much was thrown at you in this poem. I guess it helped you write it down superbly sir. Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 8, 2011 at 11:47 PM
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Oh my! Fantastic! I had to read it again and again.
I love the last line.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 8, 2011 at 11:38 PM
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Hi Justi Thank you so much, I'm sure would give a few shells.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 11:13 PM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Once long ago Wiley I bought an ex navy coat we had to work all day in the rain until the coats were so heavy that we had to change for the spare and I still remember how nice it felt to put on a dry coat for a while. The other ones kind of dried on the bonnet of the old Morris I sent you a photo of it once.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 11:10 PM
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Been doing it a long time Jay once only in my head. thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 11:05 PM
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FS it is nicer in reality, but you have a great imagination.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 11:04 PM
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WE shall all be broke soon Sam if the top cats don't play the right tune.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 11:03 PM
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Yes If you have an old enamel cup I will show you how to hold it Shobana when we busk.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 11:01 PM
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Re: rewrites are always great...actually anything that you write is great.
Well I had a shock Kabu I had a call which I thought was from the Doctor's and it wiped my brain, then I found out it was from the bank so I have got to sort that out now. So I just posted something that came up. I like to change rewrites but sometimes it won't work.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2011 at 10:58 PM
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rewrites are always great...actually anything that you write is great.
posted by
Kabu
on August 8, 2011 at 5:18 PM
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Quite something there CC.
posted by
shobana
on August 8, 2011 at 5:04 PM
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I love the affirmation at the end! And it seems we are all born equally then the harsh reality sets in that we are divided by money of all things; which incidentally is the root of all evil so I am glad I am broke! lol I love a rewrite, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 8, 2011 at 2:22 PM
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You make the reader feel as though one is experiencing the kiss.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 8, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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Yes sir, you are talanted my friend.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 8, 2011 at 11:12 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
You reminded me of my drinking years and I wore an overcoat like that as I sipped my soup at Sally Ann's. Great poem old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 8, 2011 at 9:40 AM
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Oh what a vision. I will have to read this many times. They emptiness of finances and the fullness of heart. This is awesome.
posted by
Justi
on August 8, 2011 at 9:16 AM
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