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Re: Re: Whisperer4U
Leslie
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 4, 2011 at 9:23 AM
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Help Lion I though we were going to start having summer. Fortunately it is hot and your poem is refreshing.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 4, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks Bill, I guess it does a bit
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 7:59 AM
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Re: sam444
Gosh, I do hope you don't catch fire out there, I'll hope you get a little rain instead.
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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Re: it is cooler here this evening and the days are considerably shorter
Thanks Kabu, I'm glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 7:39 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 7:16 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
thank you so much, I think the honour is mine, though
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 6:41 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Thanks so much, glad you like it
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 6:36 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley, I thought I'd try to capture that and at the same time use it as a metaphor but I'm not sure if the last bit worked
posted by
lionreign
on August 4, 2011 at 6:34 AM
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{ The poem emits calmness. BC-A, Bill’s R{{st
posted by
BC-A
on August 4, 2011 at 4:02 AM
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I know it is all too soon for us here as well, but tomorrow we have a fire weather advisory! A thunderstorm is coming through with lightning that could set my state ablaze because it is so dry! But this was great imagery nonetheless! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 3, 2011 at 10:36 PM
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it is cooler here this evening and the days are considerably shorter
Please Summer stay on a little longer....but the picture you write is very very vivid. Congratulations.
posted by
Kabu
on August 3, 2011 at 5:34 PM
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A beautiful place the mountain, where memories have taken root beneath the conifers,
and hidden among the rocks.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 3, 2011 at 3:58 PM
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Beautiful Your work inspires...I'm honored to be in a group of such inspirational, creative artist.
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 3:08 PM
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This again is nice work, I like the repeating first and last lines too.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 3, 2011 at 10:08 AM
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lionreign
That really describes the winter feelings that start creeping in day by day from now on.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 3, 2011 at 9:34 AM
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