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Me, too. It's nice to believe that our wishes may come true
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 11:16 PM
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Nicely done; I have always been intrigued by falling stars! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 3, 2011 at 11:03 PM
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Your compliments are my inspirations...and what keeps my star shining it's light. Thank you for reading
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 3:04 PM
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Thank you for reading, and sharing your comments...it's what keeps my star shining, and from burning out
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 3:02 PM
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This is superb, the flow of the poem is very natural and gently rhythmic and the close is just fantastic - great job!
posted by
lionreign
on August 3, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Simply breathtaking!
posted by
steamfly
on August 3, 2011 at 4:44 AM
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Not just the stars...the moon, and the sun, too May all your star wishes come true
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 1:50 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
Thank you...my wish is to continue shining, and soaring. But, if I am to fall, and burn out...hope it is BLAZING
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 1:41 AM
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Well if you are claiming the star Whispers it will be a job for others to get excited, Um, Um ,
let me think what you will wish for. Yes I liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 2, 2011 at 11:10 PM
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Whisperer4U
Ü This is good. Your choice of words makes the lines fall. I feel the motion in the heavens. Excellent. Love. BC-A, Bill’s R{{st
posted by
BC-A
on August 2, 2011 at 10:22 PM
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Thank you....Keep wishing, and may all of your wishes come true
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 2, 2011 at 3:30 PM
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I always make a wish on the first star I see and on falling stars so naturaly I find this a wonderful poem...thanks.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 2, 2011 at 3:10 PM
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