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Yes I expect so Whisperer . Thank you 

posted by C_C_T on July 28, 2011 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: A great description
Just cannot avoid it at times Malclom thank you

posted by C_C_T on July 28, 2011 at 12:29 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Femia you are welcome. Be happy

posted by C_C_T on July 28, 2011 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

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Right Lion good luck.

posted by C_C_T on July 28, 2011 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Poignant and full, CC
Thank you Raye a job to catch up.

posted by C_C_T on July 28, 2011 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant and full, CC
Well done..

posted by Raye09 on July 28, 2011 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

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I shall attempt to learn from it instead :P

posted by lionreign on July 28, 2011 at 6:51 AM | link to this | reply

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REMEMBER I LOVE YOU FOR YOU ARE THE MAN OF THE HOUR WITH FLOWERS IN HAND AS I READ THESE BEAUTIFUL WORDS AS A REMINDER YOU DO CARE. Nice wirting. Fema

posted by fememefeme on July 27, 2011 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

From the heart and soul...just remember, "This too, shall pass"

posted by Whisperer4U on July 27, 2011 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

The swing and her sunny disposition will fit nicely with the red apple old chap.

posted by WileyJohn on July 27, 2011 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

A great description
of that void we all feel from time to time I think.

posted by malcolm on July 27, 2011 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C.C....I feel like shobana, and hope his sadness soon leaves him....
It must be nice to feel like that Rumor, pass the wine. 

posted by C_C_T on July 27, 2011 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

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Well thank you Lion don't follow my example

posted by C_C_T on July 27, 2011 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

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No I suppose not Taps but I wonder whose fault it is.

posted by C_C_T on July 27, 2011 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

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Frustration probably Shobana.

posted by C_C_T on July 27, 2011 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

C.C....I feel like shobana, and hope his sadness soon leaves him....
With all that he's described so well, I feel it will.....at least, here's hoping....

posted by Rumor on July 27, 2011 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed this a great deal

posted by lionreign on July 27, 2011 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

I love a man who is notorious for "...running round
With bunches of fictitious flowers
Whilst feeling gallant."
One doesn't find too many of those these days.

posted by TAPS. on July 27, 2011 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

I'm sure his sadness will soon evade him CC. Great poem there...prose??

posted by shobana on July 26, 2011 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

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Come on FS I hope you cannot claim to be one of them.

posted by C_C_T on July 26, 2011 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

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I share his sentiments Sam, one has to think of the future, I just hope he remembers his pledge in the years to come.   

 

posted by C_C_T on July 26, 2011 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: well done i am somewhat down this evening
OH Kabu you poor thing, it is morning now but I am sending you some happy vibes and Wiley.  

posted by C_C_T on July 26, 2011 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Right Bill ^: 6:48 off to get a blood and urine test with a bucket and a gallon jar.

posted by C_C_T on July 26, 2011 at 10:51 PM | link to this | reply

CHIFFCHAFF

{ Unusually you manage to write a poem of imagery that vanished or are fictitious sir. I guess that’s excellent. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on July 26, 2011 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

well done i am somewhat down this evening

posted by Kabu on July 26, 2011 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

WOW! This is my mood today! I am having a tough time picking myself up and moving forward! My son is guilt ridden for no good reason and I can't find the right words to soothe! I did notice the wonderful cadence in this poem, poem, lol! But seriously you have a great aptitude for that in you longer poems! They seem long when I first start to read and before I know it I have read it! A nice gift to possess as well I might add! I got your email and will respond this evening as soon as my baseball game is over! The ace is on the mound and I am looking for a big night all the way around! You are very kind to think of Christopher! I got an email from him this morning and I had asked him if he was current on his journal! He said he just wanted to forget that place he was out! And another startling revelation is that he said the military service stops with him and he did want his kids, whenever he has them, lol, enlisting! He said there were many other ways for his kids to serve their country without going into the military! So, the soldier and service to country are in him and he will impart a true and direct course for his! I don't know if he will succeed because there is a rich history of military service in the family! I pray he is successful! He did say he had a story line though and he will glean from the notes he has take and write from there! All is not lost! Have a great evening, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on July 26, 2011 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

I know of a few who ended up feeling that empty.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 26, 2011 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply