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Nice work using the vein as an imperfection or even a signature of a sort then being rueful almost immediately! I liked how it symbolized covering things up but they are never truly gone! A most insight poem, too! sam
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sam444
on July 8, 2011 at 6:34 AM
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Thank you Lion i wish I could paint.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 7, 2011 at 9:43 AM
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Very clever poem and you brought out a number of excellent points as part of the overall perspective, I enjoyed this a lot
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lionreign
on July 7, 2011 at 8:10 AM
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I guess so FS a good job it is not too uniform.
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C_C_T
on July 7, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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Re: Hmnnn yes i don't go for perfection myself it is so sterile
Neither do I Kabu, why do we all wish to be though.
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C_C_T
on July 7, 2011 at 12:18 AM
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Yes right Wiley, advice taken
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C_C_T
on July 7, 2011 at 12:16 AM
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Thank you Simone, perhaps it is a bird in the hand.
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C_C_T
on July 7, 2011 at 12:14 AM
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Re: Fantastic artistic gleanings, CC!
Hello Raye I guess we are all a bit that way inclined unfortunately
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C_C_T
on July 7, 2011 at 12:13 AM
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SO well written! I loved how you took me through the poem thinking of her as flesh and blood and at the end discovering she was an image... a painting... Bravo CC! xoxoxo
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Sinome
on July 6, 2011 at 9:32 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
She sounds like a winner old chap and don't let her get away.
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WileyJohn
on July 6, 2011 at 8:46 PM
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Hmnnn yes i don't go for perfection myself it is so sterile
I like a little chaos.
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Kabu
on July 6, 2011 at 12:43 PM
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Attaining perfection can be a bit painful, I find.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 6, 2011 at 11:47 AM
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Fantastic artistic gleanings, CC!
You truly draw the reader's eye into the scene you create - splendid; can see the juxtaposition of the imperfection of his reality to the perfection of his illusion.
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Raye09
on July 6, 2011 at 9:47 AM
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