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Re: sam444
thank you for heading straight to the metaphor and I am delighted that it resonates with you
posted by
lionreign
on July 6, 2011 at 8:14 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill, I'm glad that came across well enough
posted by
lionreign
on July 6, 2011 at 8:06 AM
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Re: elysianfields
thanks Elyse, it does seem to have half worked... we had the rain but it is followed by more rain
posted by
lionreign
on July 6, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thanks so much!
posted by
lionreign
on July 6, 2011 at 8:00 AM
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This poem fits so perfectly in regard to the uncertainty in my life right now! Not that any of it is bad, just unsettled! So, this was fine for me to read because I am preparing so that when it finally concludes, all will be sunny! I love it when I come upon a poem that hits my melancholy mood but the cheeriness will be at the end if one makes it happen! KUDOS! My poem today is loosely based on the events currently dominating my life right now! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 6, 2011 at 7:44 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
I'm always doing a rain dance
posted by
lionreign
on July 6, 2011 at 7:32 AM
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lionreign
õ There’s a sensory experience of sound in your excellent poem. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 5, 2011 at 10:42 PM
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Lion could you come do a rain dance here in Texas? This was so powerful to read. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 5, 2011 at 12:01 PM
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Love the build up and then the ending....beautiful sense of calm and light! Thanks for your visit.
posted by
Nita09
on July 5, 2011 at 9:19 AM
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I hope you are doing a rain dance as well Lion my sentiments entirely.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 5, 2011 at 8:49 AM
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