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What a fabulous sight that must have been - you conveyed it well too
posted by
lionreign
on July 5, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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I still look here.
Let the sun's rays rest on your bare arms, and allow a portion of the day to let your imagination frolick.
posted by
Azur
on July 4, 2011 at 4:27 PM
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I always like a re-worked poem, it gives added insight! There are time when we are not up to par for one reason or another and we can only ask ourselves to get through it one step at a time! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2011 at 4:18 PM
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i would take your load and carry it for you darling, i would see you smile
in the sun, able to take a deep deep breath at last and enjoy the perfume of the flowers the beauty of life. but no matter whether you are well or suffering, up or not...i;ll always read your posts...for as long as we both are here. with love.xoxoxoxo
posted by
Kabu
on July 4, 2011 at 3:56 PM
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I enjoyed this... and will read on ...
I am a blogit oldie but with a lengthy hiatus for personal circumstances pulled me away for some time. I just wanted to comment on you writing more "Up" ...
I have had both many good and of course bad times and every one of them a teaching if you will. However, a lot of my writing is considered "dark" I suppose but that is not a representation of me as a person - far from it actually. I will share with you this:
"Go for the jugular. If something scary comes up, go for it. That's where the energy is. Otherwise you'll spend all your time writing around what makes you nervous. It will probably be abstract, bland writing because you're avoiding the truth" (N. Goldberg, 1990)
Hemingway said, "Write hard and clear about what hurts. Don't avoid it. It has all the energy. Don't worry, no one ever died of it. You might cry or laugh but not die".
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on July 4, 2011 at 12:17 PM
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May the sun shine upon you and lighten your load.
posted by
Troosha
on July 4, 2011 at 10:57 AM
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Those unwanted journies can be so difficult on the soul.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 4, 2011 at 9:57 AM
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Re:
I try to be a strand or two of laughs no matter what, CC..:)) Thank You, My Friend..
posted by
Raye09
on July 4, 2011 at 7:26 AM
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Wll Raye you can't really be expected to be a bundle of laughs, but your spirit shines through even if you feel it does not, I like your poems, old or new and I hope you feel better after posting them
posted by
C_C_T
on July 4, 2011 at 12:03 AM
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