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 I love the glow from this poem...the LIGHT - the silver lining and the hope and the imagery.  This bears your sweetness and Love so well dear Sinome.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 26, 2011 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

It does seem to me that the dreams of the young
are much sweeter, lighter, and more free flowing
than those of us old codgers.

posted by TAPS. on June 21, 2011 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

I like the image of the neon lights weeping

posted by jollyjeff on June 21, 2011 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

I find that I go through dryspells of dreaming myself.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 21, 2011 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Nita09 on June 21, 2011 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

®  Try to sleep love! LOl. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 21, 2011 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Until tomorrow Simone

posted by C_C_T on June 20, 2011 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
I bet you'll dream again and write more of the beautiful poetry of your dreams, you hopes, your loves.

posted by WileyJohn on June 20, 2011 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

darling you are such a special person and such a special poet....
sending you lots of hugs.

posted by Kabu on June 20, 2011 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

This is a beautiful poem all the way to the end.... I will not accept that last line. You can dream, you can live your dreams, you can do anything you want.... You are a wonderful, loving and very talented lady. Be blessed and hug yourself you could use that toady.

posted by Justi on June 20, 2011 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply