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Excellent once again, Marta!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 18, 2011 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

I heard the moon was really big and brightand so is your poem

posted by Lanetay on June 18, 2011 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

 Yes dear Sinome, sometimes we are afraid to move - to disturb perfect.  Shades of Paradies here.  xoxoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 17, 2011 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Gorgeous
and so apt - especially when hearing birdsong before a thunderstorm

posted by malcolm on June 17, 2011 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

There are indeed certain moments that command stillness.  

posted by Troosha on June 17, 2011 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

Our dreams do so much for us.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 17, 2011 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice Simone

posted by C_C_T on June 17, 2011 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!  Thank you for visiting me...

posted by lovelyladymonk on June 17, 2011 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

¹w A nice grouping of words too. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on June 17, 2011 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

I know that moment so well, when to live or move would destroy the beauty of something so magical that it must be a dream

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Ah, I love that last line especially! Moving!

posted by Ariala on June 17, 2011 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply