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I wonder and ponder the close of nothing to feel as well! I would hope I could go on were I in the circumstance! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 17, 2011 at 7:48 PM
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Soft words should work the best.
posted by
mariss9
on June 17, 2011 at 11:19 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Thank you Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on June 17, 2011 at 9:57 AM
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Thank you Lion
posted by
C_C_T
on June 17, 2011 at 9:56 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
¹w You show sweetness power here sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 17, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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Beautifully written
posted by
lionreign
on June 17, 2011 at 6:33 AM
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Re: Perhaps, or maybe a new beginning to aspire to...well done, I like it
Cheers Ariala, thank you for reading.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:32 PM
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Thank you E.E. I am so pleased that you think so.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:29 PM
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Whatever you like John, I don't really mind, I can see your point, but I like to be reasonably truthful even if I don't want to be believed. Pass the V*****.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:28 PM
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Thank you Shobana, have a happy weekend
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:19 PM
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Re: Feeling metaphors here....
Thank you Madam it trys for them
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:18 PM
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Just a while in time Wiley romance is your forte how else would you have captured your prize.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:16 PM
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Re: actually I don't want to believe the last line...it breaks my blissful
Sorry Kabu one has to be hard in this trade cuddles are not free.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2011 at 11:13 PM
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actually I don't want to believe the last line...it breaks my blissful
dreaming.
posted by
Kabu
on June 16, 2011 at 8:24 PM
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".......Though still I plunder dreams searching for a way
to bind you with soft words. I feel them float ......."
Methinks you don't have to plunder your dreams long to bind her with soft words, or anything else my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 16, 2011 at 7:59 PM
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Feeling metaphors here....
posted by
Straightforward
on June 16, 2011 at 5:17 PM
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CC, a beautiful touching poem. Well done my friend.
posted by
shobana
on June 16, 2011 at 4:29 PM
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This one is really amazing--perhaps the command of language, and somehow being 2 places in time at once. But I would consider deleting the last line. I was traveling parallel to the experience and having a fine time. Then you ring the bell on my recess, and reintroduce your cynical reality. Delete last line, and you'll have a much better poem!
posted by
jfm32
on June 16, 2011 at 1:08 PM
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my goodness ChCh but the feelings, the wonder, the conjecture - the marvel within this and of this all makes me have that ahh moment - Stunning, lovely and rich poetry here.
E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on June 16, 2011 at 12:59 PM
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Perhaps, or maybe a new beginning to aspire to...well done, I like it
posted by
Ariala
on June 16, 2011 at 12:23 PM
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