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 Lion, I have those days - daze sometimes and I try my best to let it go and see what visions or rather, what inspiration I will find.  Ah, this is delightful - I always follow when I see a butterfly=ies wings.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 25, 2011 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444
Thank you, it is an image that very much applies to me some days

posted by lionreign on June 20, 2011 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

I could envision ideas and thought flitting about like a butterfly! Grand imagery for it got my mind going all about! sam 

posted by sam444 on June 17, 2011 at 7:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: perhaps your mind landed here today where butterflies abound
Thanks Kabu, i envy you - I am planting to encourage them here as I find butterflies to be both beautiful and inspiring

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: jfm32
I'm glad you enjoyed this one and thank you for your comments, you sometimes offer new perspectives on what I have written (often more honest ones than the one I had originally found)

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Troosha
oh yes, otherwise I would be plundering my mental lettuces...

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Ah in those moments my mind is more a moth: a softly silent breath of night that drifts slowly into gentle slumber

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Enjoy free floating, it's refreshing! - Ash
Thanks Ash, I seem to do it quite often, but that's where half of my best lines come from so I do not complain

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
thank you sweetie   xoxoxoxx

posted by lionreign on June 17, 2011 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

perhaps your mind landed here today where butterflies abound

posted by Kabu on June 16, 2011 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

Really like this one--compact, direct, while a moment (juxtaposed against a much larger time scale) becomes what it is. Interesting choise of direction, while seemingly asking the question, "how can we be lost if we know where we are".

posted by jfm32 on June 16, 2011 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Better a butterfly than a snail......    

posted by Troosha on June 16, 2011 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

Well I feel sleepy Lion and envy your flght of fantasy

posted by C_C_T on June 16, 2011 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Enjoy free floating, it's refreshing! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 16, 2011 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

SUch refreshing honest verses  and you are... like a butterfly I mean, free and colorful and romantic and sweet... Great poem my friend xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on June 16, 2011 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply