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To the rhythm...well said, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 18, 2011 at 10:40 PM
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Sinome
m You tell about the thunder well love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 15, 2011 at 10:28 PM
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Sinpme
Thunder usually makes me apprehensive, probably because of the lightening that precedes it.You have a lovely way of turning it into a pleasantry luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 15, 2011 at 8:44 PM
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Thunder makes me restless with some primevasl longing for the storm to
finally break. It is difficult to describe...I have heard stories that one of my Grandmothers was the same.
posted by
Kabu
on June 15, 2011 at 6:12 PM
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Beautiful! Gorgeous imagry. I love a thunderstorm arriving, even when we don't really need any more rain.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 15, 2011 at 12:35 PM
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Sights and sounds that can evoke different feelings.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 15, 2011 at 11:46 AM
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Perhaps you were frightened as a child Simone, but if it inspires you to write it is a mixed blessing. I usually swear and switch off the computer as cannot often read my own writing.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 15, 2011 at 10:03 AM
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Fabulous! Your imagery is sublime and the pace of this poem just sweeps up the reader and carries them along xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on June 15, 2011 at 7:21 AM
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You are such a great from the heart poet. Don't waste the now mourning the past. Many things come only for a season and some of our dreams are those things. They are here for a time and gone forever, but they left you with a gift, a spot in your spirit and an added love of something or someone. Be blessed my dear friend.
posted by
Justi
on June 15, 2011 at 7:08 AM
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Sinome, I'm a lover of thunder and actually storms...I felt this whole poem - beautifully written dear Angel. (yes please send some rain) xoxox
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 15, 2011 at 6:30 AM
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