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I think the Promise Land can be fulfilling in its own right! I think so many desire Heaven but neglect to do the things it takes to make it happen! Great message in this poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2011 at 5:06 AM
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ChCh this writing is simply moving. Has the qualities I admire in a lovelorn, yearning - romantic poem. You write so warm and dear and 'real' as if you feel every word you pen. This is deep with your heart. very touching. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on June 5, 2011 at 11:42 AM
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Re: Come together right now...
Bill Good luck be humble sometimes works.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:53 PM
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Re: Intense emotion very well expressed, CC
Raye Thank you, I hope that you feel better
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:51 PM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Wiley Thank you, hope that you are feeling better, take it easy.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:48 PM
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FS Something's are not meant to be, but we think they are at the time.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:46 PM
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Femia well one has to hope, I hope that is good news.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:44 PM
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Troosha I guess not and the aftermath is no better
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:41 PM
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Hi Rumor nice to see you back . Thank you for your kind comments
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:40 PM
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Re: some relationships are meant to be short lived , without regret without
Kabu Steady on Kabu I hear music.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:37 PM
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Thank you Taps the ending is always difficult as we all know.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:35 PM
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Re: Wow, powerful and that last line really has an impact!
Ariala thank you, it falls into place sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2011 at 11:33 PM
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Come together right now...
#What’s so unusual? We’re all making up, trying to do it now sir. Goodbye, disappointed, coming back? Hope to… get together . BC-A, Bill’s RRRst
posted by
BC-A
on June 3, 2011 at 9:15 PM
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Intense emotion very well expressed, CC
posted by
Raye09
on June 3, 2011 at 6:52 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
You're wonderful ability to give us a glimpse of the promised land with your beautifully arranged poetry is quite a gift for we who read you old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 3, 2011 at 6:39 PM
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So many people have seen and tasted that promised land only to find that it was not meant to be...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 3, 2011 at 6:05 PM
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CC
The promise land is a place where there is always hope CC. missed reading your works but will return home next Wed. had to stay longer. Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on June 3, 2011 at 12:06 PM
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As Taps said you wrapped the poem up nicely with your last line. Goodbyes are never easy.....
posted by
Troosha
on June 3, 2011 at 11:36 AM
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C.C...
not much one can do when the one we seek after decides to hide their emotions...not much we can do than say good bye (putting into words what they have already demonstrated)....that last line is superbly well done..
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posted by
Rumor
on June 3, 2011 at 10:33 AM
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some relationships are meant to be short lived , without regret without
guilt and here you have written so perfectly of just such a relationship.....a wonderful poem by the Master ...from crocodiles to glimpses of Paradise...your versatility astounds me.
posted by
Kabu
on June 3, 2011 at 9:02 AM
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I loved the last line which was a great culmination for a great poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 3, 2011 at 8:57 AM
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Wow, powerful and that last line really has an impact!
posted by
Ariala
on June 3, 2011 at 8:38 AM
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