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Great writing! I've seen the moon from the window of a train.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 31, 2011 at 7:02 PM
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A difficult realization to come to.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 31, 2011 at 6:24 PM
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yes my darling when it is over ...no point hanging on....life does go on.
posted by
Kabu
on May 31, 2011 at 5:55 PM
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Time stops when I read your lines...I 'see' your imagery so well. and this touched my heart dear Sinome. xoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 31, 2011 at 9:55 AM
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Beautiful work again, sweetie, you have mastered the art of tenderly breaking your readers' heart
posted by
lionreign
on May 31, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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Poignant as a slow stab. The poem strikes home by word and by shape. Enjoyed it.
posted by
RoseyP
on May 31, 2011 at 5:33 AM
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The soul lives Simone although it must carry sadness at times.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 31, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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Sweet lady did not someone tell you there is no end? You are a wonderful soul.
posted by
Justi
on May 30, 2011 at 8:56 PM
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Sinome
Ü Aww it mustn’t end love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 30, 2011 at 8:34 PM
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