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Well hurray for a holiday but I don't know if it is only here. Well not being very educated I only read Shelley a little and I though all poems had to rhyme I know you keep up the tradition.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 27, 2011 at 11:09 AM
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Gosh that is not an easy scheme to rhyme to and still have your poem make sense - well done!
posted by
lionreign
on May 27, 2011 at 7:00 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
A job to go far the other way Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on May 27, 2011 at 6:51 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Z Write your way to the past sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst l
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BC-A
on May 27, 2011 at 5:00 AM
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Right FS better to be safe than sorry.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 26, 2011 at 11:32 PM
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Re: Poignantly and excellently expressed..
Of course not Raye sometimes the hook is tempting but one fears leaving the stream.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 26, 2011 at 11:31 PM
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Thank you yellowrose I hope you enjoy the now moment, sometimes it is the sweetest.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 26, 2011 at 11:28 PM
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Re: A very honest poem with roots...now to see if the roots are planted in a
Ariala you are just too romantic, but it makes nice poems.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 26, 2011 at 11:20 PM
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thank you Troosha young new beginnings just happen and the one becomes selective I hope.
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C_C_T
on May 26, 2011 at 11:18 PM
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Thank you Sam yes indeed I suppose one should explain what one is trying to achieve. In this case it was the attraction of the older woman, who would appear quite young these days.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 26, 2011 at 11:16 PM
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I liked how this was presented in couplets! And I am with FSI, it seems to go that way! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 26, 2011 at 10:36 PM
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Oh those "new" beginnings.... they raise as many questions and apprehensions as they do emotions. Beautifully done!
posted by
Troosha
on May 26, 2011 at 4:11 PM
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A very honest poem with roots...now to see if the roots are planted in a
soil that blossoms into life.
posted by
Ariala
on May 26, 2011 at 1:52 PM
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Dwelling in "once upon a time"... I do this so often... so
celebrating the
now moment is a must, for me. A creative, searching and heartfelt poem.
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yellowrose55
on May 26, 2011 at 1:24 PM
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Poignantly and excellently expressed..
Once a heart/emotions are tapped - hooked? I think, CC the hope then is to not sink. Have my fingers crossed this will not be mis-understood; apologies in advance if it is..
posted by
Raye09
on May 26, 2011 at 12:57 PM
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I have found at times that the gift did not match the temptation either.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 26, 2011 at 11:00 AM
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