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I don't knowif you want advise but I would say the Lords Prayer, picture Gods hands put Mom in it and ask God to take over then go on and enjoy your life.
posted by
sunflowersis
on May 17, 2011 at 9:43 PM
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If I may....
Your poem absolutely conveyed the pain of the author - but I think it loses something in the wordiness. I suggest you write a blog about where the pain comes from, and the a succinct poem that is instantly understood. Writing is healing, but like Sam said, at some point you have to stop letting anyone steal your future joy
Good luck to you and I look forward to reading more.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 17, 2011 at 5:27 PM
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I had a horrible mother and I do not allow anything that happened previously to interrupt the life I desire now that I am raising myself so to speak! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2011 at 11:58 AM
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A very powerful poem filled with the pain that gave it birth...but there are so few here who recognize that pain and they will avoid it at all cost I am afraid, but no matter...welcome to blogit.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 17, 2011 at 8:39 AM
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