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                Very vivid 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Cheerygirl
                     on May 16, 2011 at 3:02 PM
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                    Sinome
                
                Z a sad story of reality in which the fairies needed are real adults love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
  
                
                    posted by
                    BC-A
                     on May 16, 2011 at 2:45 AM
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                Oh it breaks my heart. When they are women they have to gather the pieces, join them and polish it all to get through an ordinary day. May God touch and bless each heart of abuse, pain of abandonment, fear of rejection cleans them of these painful burdens and make them whole as you intended them to be in the Jesus' Name. Such awesome work, I can see her, and I have seen her time and time again 15 to 20 years later. You have such a loving heart. 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Justi
                     on May 15, 2011 at 10:12 PM
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                wow how sad
  
                
                    posted by
                    Lanetay
                     on May 15, 2011 at 7:25 PM
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                    Sinome
                
                Very sad...

  
                
                    posted by
                    Nautikos
                     on May 15, 2011 at 6:27 PM
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                I have seen so much like this in our broken world.  
                
                    posted by
                    UtahJay
                     on May 15, 2011 at 2:32 PM
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                The sort of many little girls in this world, I fear. What deep sadness your words convey!  
                
                    posted by
                    adnohr
                     on May 15, 2011 at 1:45 PM
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                So what could you do Simone, if it could become better I suppose one would allow it to happen regretfully. 
   
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on May 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM
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                    Sinome
                
                You could almost be describing Kabu as a l'il girl there luv.
  
                
                    posted by
                    WileyJohn
                     on May 15, 2011 at 10:43 AM
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                    one feels such pain that a child who should be laughing and playing
                
                has experienced so much pain....so much negativity.  
                
                    posted by
                    Kabu
                     on May 15, 2011 at 10:38 AM
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                The speaker expresses the negative emotion so well.  
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on May 15, 2011 at 10:06 AM
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