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Thank you every one ladies especially No wonder i did not make much headway.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 15, 2011 at 11:08 AM
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From the title to the end, it is perfect.
I love the way you put your works together.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 15, 2011 at 10:43 AM
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Sounds like me.....
posted by
Straightforward
on May 15, 2011 at 7:34 AM
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I can relate to this person!...
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 14, 2011 at 6:55 PM
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Hmnnnn I see a bit of a younger me in this.
posted by
Kabu
on May 14, 2011 at 6:18 PM
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I think that that is a noble desire! I like how it doesn't affect the moment but rather enhances it with the playing with the fire! I love to play with a camp fire myself! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 14, 2011 at 5:06 PM
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So often is the case it seems now a days.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 14, 2011 at 3:54 PM
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Oh such height and lows made me dizzy as the last beach ride I took some fifty years ago. Whoosh! Personally I think she needs help; however, she is totally yours so you keep her as you choose. I always like your poems sometimes not so much the people in them. LOL
posted by
Justi
on May 14, 2011 at 3:00 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
P colorful words sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 14, 2011 at 2:41 PM
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CC
I can't decide if she's tormented or knows precisely what she's doing.
posted by
Troosha
on May 14, 2011 at 2:05 PM
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Incredible range of thought and emotion, CC!
when a heartbeat is stolen
days become the seeking sigh
and are endlessly beholden
to emptiness and cream butter pie
(Brokenness can cause too many calories to beckon - must be careful..
)
*Joking aside, this a deep and reaching poem ~ Kudos!
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 1:11 PM
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