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Is it deception of something like optical illusion?
posted by
Straightforward
on May 15, 2011 at 11:25 PM
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Re: Good one.
Thank you very much, Dear Kabu..
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:28 PM
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So true, Dear Sam - Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:27 PM
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Thank you so much, Dear Troosha..
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:27 PM
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Much appreciated, FSI...
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:26 PM
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Thanks so much, Jay..
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Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:26 PM
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Well stated, CC, Thank you...
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:26 PM
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What a tangled web indeed, TAPS! Thank you for the visit.
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 9:25 PM
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Good one.
posted by
Kabu
on May 14, 2011 at 7:11 PM
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I liked finding the hope because it will lighten in nearly every circumstance! I liked how the words came together to complete the entity! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 14, 2011 at 3:42 PM
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Stunning, Raye - absolutely stunning!
posted by
Troosha
on May 14, 2011 at 3:12 PM
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You paint a vivid picture with so few words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 14, 2011 at 11:28 AM
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Of all, it is your poetry I love to read.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 14, 2011 at 10:56 AM
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You are right I think Ray she is a deceiver ever, one wants and one sees and it dazzles. Once I thought it was a different grain in the sand, but so many grains share the same attributes when one moves the sand. Thank you for your comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 14, 2011 at 9:15 AM
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This really got me thinking about humans using deception as a means of survival. Someone gave me a really good example of this the other day concealing something from her husband. I've been a little concerned since, wondering what it is going to be like for her when he finds out--and you know sooner or later he will.
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TAPS.
on May 14, 2011 at 8:32 AM
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Yes, She is and real-life pragmatic too, Bill. Which can be painful to see and know, but onward we must go..Thank you..
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Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 7:36 AM
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F Nature’s wonderful love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 14, 2011 at 7:24 AM
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Re: Wise words...feeling the need for such thoughts at the moment...
Thanks, Ted. Be well.
posted by
Raye09
on May 14, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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Wise words...feeling the need for such thoughts at the moment...
well done as usual, Raye...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 14, 2011 at 7:12 AM
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