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                    you have such deep wonderful feelings, you pull me deeply into the 
                
                sadness of this poem. well done darling.  
                
                    posted by
                    Kabu
                     on May 13, 2011 at 9:29 PM
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                    Sinome
                
                ".........everything blows away
  but this sadness, held by my tears,
  this sadness, will stay. "
  But our joy in reading you is always here, so I pray your real life is happy luv.
  
                
                    posted by
                    WileyJohn
                     on May 13, 2011 at 9:08 PM
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                Unfortunate it is when those negative emotions remain.  
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on May 13, 2011 at 7:16 PM
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                Very sad, but I loved the ending.  
                
                    posted by
                    UtahJay
                     on May 13, 2011 at 1:44 PM
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                A secret place revealed, and thru your shower of words, I feel I just had a bath--and that's a compliment I don't give out lightly.
                
                    posted by
                    jfm32
                     on May 13, 2011 at 1:06 PM
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                    simone
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    poet_prophetess
                     on May 13, 2011 at 12:45 PM
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god bless you, sinome.  
                
                    posted by
                    poet_prophetess
                     on May 13, 2011 at 12:45 PM
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                    posted by
                    Nita09
                     on May 13, 2011 at 7:28 AM
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                AS long as you can still feel Simone, you are still that woman. Thank you for your comments.
   
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on May 13, 2011 at 7:03 AM
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                Only you can shape melancholy with such tender skill xoxox  
                
                    posted by
                    lionreign
                     on May 13, 2011 at 6:55 AM
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                Sadness is not a bad thing. Sometimes it is all you have and that is so much more than total absence. You be blessed dear woman. 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Justi
                     on May 12, 2011 at 10:50 PM
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