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Life takes some interesting twists and turns, that is for certain.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 12, 2011 at 10:19 AM
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bravo! once again..excellent writing!
posted by
Inspired7211
on May 12, 2011 at 9:19 AM
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Lol! I like this, it's a very unexpected piece with a very difficult rhyme scheme - great work
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:04 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
R Mystery makes great poetry sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 12, 2011 at 2:45 AM
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Oh my, delightfully naughty and so You, CC!
posted by
Raye09
on May 12, 2011 at 2:08 AM
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I can relate to things not going as planned! I thought it was marvelous to set this up with couplets, too! FANTASTIC! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 12, 2011 at 12:06 AM
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I can't even imagine where you get your ideas. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
on May 11, 2011 at 7:27 PM
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Yes... clever, indeed, and delightful tale of passion.
posted by
Troosha
on May 11, 2011 at 6:55 PM
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brilliant MR. C.C. of course.
posted by
Kabu
on May 11, 2011 at 6:17 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
I wish I had a friendly conscience like that. LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 11, 2011 at 5:57 PM
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This is so clever, so funny and so well done. You cannot imagine what my thoughts were when I envisioned a pair of brown and browner wing tip shoes on the young ladies shoulders...WHAT!!!!!!!!!!! really cute.
posted by
Justi
on May 11, 2011 at 5:51 PM
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posted by
Ariala
on May 11, 2011 at 3:03 PM
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C.C. ...
At least you have a very honest conscience bearer...nothing coloured about his thinking, but a nice blush on his wings as one would expect...
Hmmmm, so who is keeping who from vice??...
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posted by
Rumor
on May 11, 2011 at 1:31 PM
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