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Re: Sinome
thank you so much xoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:26 AM
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Re: Enchantingly alluring!
Thanks Raye09
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:25 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks Sam, I think as summer approaches I become more aware of light and its effects
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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Re: Ahhhh just lovely, you romantic you.
Thanks Kabu (I'm not, I'm a realist!!)
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:17 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley, it was great fun to write
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Re: lionreign...
Thanks Rumor, I always enjoy saying things through a story (which are always thick with metaphor, as you spotted)
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:09 AM
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Re: Troosha
Thank you, I do my best
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:07 AM
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Re: shamasehar
Thank you - that lesson was one I took a long time to learn
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:06 AM
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Re: UtahJay
I think so... often a person is beautiful because their outside reflects something from inside
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Me? A romantic? Not at all, I am a realist in a world shaped by love and beauty
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 7:59 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2011 at 7:56 AM
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You are indeed a poetic soul my dear friend :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 12, 2011 at 7:53 AM
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Enchantingly alluring!
posted by
Raye09
on May 12, 2011 at 2:10 AM
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Well done! And my guess is that he will not live to regret it! I liked how light played a role in this poem, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 11, 2011 at 11:46 PM
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Ahhhh just lovely, you romantic you.
posted by
Kabu
on May 11, 2011 at 5:53 PM
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lionreign
Hot man, that was a fire stoker and very beautifully written....
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 11, 2011 at 5:38 PM
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lionreign...
Every line is a perfect metaphor, a perfect image, all leading to the climax we await - he is going to stay with her.
...(how could he not?..
.:)
posted by
Rumor
on May 11, 2011 at 1:35 PM
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So sweet and tender (but then I've come to expect nothing less from you).
posted by
Troosha
on May 11, 2011 at 11:09 AM
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........
its wise to follow your heart!
posted by
shamasehar
on May 11, 2011 at 9:35 AM
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Sometimes it is what is on the inside that sways us.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 11, 2011 at 9:31 AM
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I would imagine he had no choice Lion, you are romantic.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 11, 2011 at 9:02 AM
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{ like a story told through the senses. Excellent. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 11, 2011 at 8:45 AM
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