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This is a fine attempt! I especially enjoyed the close! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 11, 2011 at 11:30 PM
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A wonderful way this is to celebrate spring!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 10, 2011 at 7:21 PM
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A great and wonderful poem indeed .
posted by
afzal50
on May 10, 2011 at 7:07 PM
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actually when i threw all the rules out the window i wrote better poetry
like painting...learn the rules then throw them away. this really speaks of Spring and is great and isn't it just life. we pick things up and drop them and pick them up again later. So now you have started i hope that you have the urge to keep going love.
posted by
Kabu
on May 10, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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