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I don't know Sinome, sometimes it is hard to say which will win. Lovely poem.
posted by
shobana
on May 9, 2011 at 3:51 PM
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Sinome
Loved the poetry and the arrangement of it and you definitely are in the light not the dark.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 9, 2011 at 2:00 PM
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Profound. Haunting. Leaving the reader to nod in understanding, then to worry. Beautifully done.
posted by
adnohr
on May 9, 2011 at 1:40 PM
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It's a constant battle, that is for certain.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 9, 2011 at 12:26 PM
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gorgeous imagery and such beautiful rhythms
posted by
lionreign
on May 9, 2011 at 10:15 AM
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Excellent poem ...thank you
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on May 9, 2011 at 9:48 AM
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The imagery and cadence in this wonderful poem are perfect...thank you so much for your kind remarks, coming from you they are special indeed.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 9, 2011 at 8:34 AM
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I think you have won Simone. Thank you for your comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2011 at 11:19 PM
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Sinome
JY In life and the sky we hope that the cloud will move away from the sun. Jaden’s so good at noticing things like that love. What a coincidence. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 8, 2011 at 9:32 PM
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I know that feeling and you describe it so creatively! Nicely done!
posted by
Ariala
on May 8, 2011 at 6:03 PM
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every second of our fleeting lives are important...must not be wasted.
posted by
Kabu
on May 8, 2011 at 5:56 PM
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i like the bird image...
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 8, 2011 at 5:37 PM
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May it ever remain a mystery for you, Sinome.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 8, 2011 at 5:26 PM
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