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That's great.
Perfect for mother's day!
posted by
TAPS.
on May 9, 2011 at 11:56 AM
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very touching poem - I enjoyed this a lot
posted by
lionreign
on May 9, 2011 at 10:17 AM
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I really liked this...
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 9, 2011 at 3:07 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
JY Emotions with people are interesting sir. lol. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 8, 2011 at 9:35 PM
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Your reticence took me aback, C.C !
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 8, 2011 at 6:11 PM
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I'm sure she would have blushed at the dapper young man taking a
second look...
posted by
Ariala
on May 8, 2011 at 6:04 PM
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a crush or so me thinks... very well written!
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 8, 2011 at 5:47 PM
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Excellent CC :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 8, 2011 at 5:17 PM
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Mum scolding you was it?..I wouldn't be surprised :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 8, 2011 at 4:41 PM
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CC the meter was just perfect in this piece, like reading a song old friend.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 8, 2011 at 3:32 PM
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I like the way you go about it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 8, 2011 at 3:13 PM
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Wasn't sure if it was a "Mom" memory or a secret crush or admiration..... either way, nicely done.
posted by
Troosha
on May 8, 2011 at 1:31 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
I don't know for sure being a wee bit addlepated when it comes to poetry and art but that seemed to me you were remembering your mum there old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 8, 2011 at 12:52 PM
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now you will never know if she wanted you to stop
posted by
Kabu
on May 8, 2011 at 11:34 AM
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