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Thank You very much, CC!
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Raye09
on May 4, 2011 at 6:53 AM
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Thank you kindly, Dear Shobana - Great to hear from you, hope all is going good for you.
posted by
Raye09
on May 4, 2011 at 6:52 AM
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Thank you, Bill!
posted by
Raye09
on May 4, 2011 at 6:51 AM
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Very much appreciated, FSI..
posted by
Raye09
on May 4, 2011 at 6:51 AM
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Thank you so much, Dear Sam...
posted by
Raye09
on May 4, 2011 at 6:50 AM
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It was really Brill., Ray mystical and sensuous a job top improve, thank you for your comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 4, 2011 at 1:22 AM
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An outstanding poem Raye - well done.
posted by
shobana
on May 4, 2011 at 12:52 AM
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Raye09
w{Your words dance love. BC-A, Bill’s R®s
posted by
BC-A
on May 3, 2011 at 8:51 PM
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Such powerful words you got there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 3, 2011 at 6:44 PM
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I really liked the use of meridian, it gave the conclusion great emphasis! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 3, 2011 at 6:19 PM
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Thanks much, Jay.
posted by
Raye09
on May 3, 2011 at 12:59 PM
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Re: an excellent rewrite...for me , my take is of real and enduring love
An oldie, Dear Kabu. Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on May 3, 2011 at 12:58 PM
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Re: Absolutely grand, Raye...by the way, I did find the notes you sent...
Thanks.
posted by
Raye09
on May 3, 2011 at 12:35 PM
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Absolutely grand, Raye...by the way, I did find the notes you sent...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 3, 2011 at 10:18 AM
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I feel like a re-write is a new poem of a used idea and this one is a powerful look at love and a good read.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 3, 2011 at 8:27 AM
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an excellent rewrite...for me , my take is of real and enduring love
throughout the good times, the passion, the bad times, and the calm of knowing real love.Given and received.
posted by
Kabu
on May 3, 2011 at 7:43 AM
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