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Re: Re: Perfection!
Indeed it is, I can relate. Health dysfunction, the chronic, misery producing kind, is a test hardy of everything we are and aspire to be beyond our physical outlines.
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 8:33 PM
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Re: Fine work...
I hope to share more with you, and thank you.
posted by
Gerontian
on May 5, 2011 at 12:34 PM
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Re: Perfection!
Wow, perfection. Thank you. I suffer from chronic, severe pain. Love forgives pain, yes, but is a blessed balm when nothing else works.
posted by
Gerontian
on May 5, 2011 at 12:33 PM
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Re: Gerontian
Thanks, a difficult poem to write, and your thoughts helped my week, already.
posted by
Gerontian
on May 5, 2011 at 12:31 PM
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Sam444, your feedback is hugely appreciated. I try to pay attention to cadence, etc, but the heart of the poem is about taking some measure of power back from physical pain. Thank your
posted by
Gerontian
on May 5, 2011 at 12:30 PM
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Thanks, Utah, I am touched that you would see this piece as a symphony of life, and appreciate your support
posted by
Gerontian
on May 5, 2011 at 12:27 PM
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Perfection!
Love true forgives all pain, I feel..
posted by
Raye09
on May 3, 2011 at 4:28 AM
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Fine work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 2, 2011 at 10:26 PM
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Gerontian
Very special and lovely and have a great week.........
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 2, 2011 at 8:17 PM
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% Our senses make life. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 2, 2011 at 8:10 PM
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Tis is absolutely marvelous! There are so many wise assertions contained within but the one that caught my eye was not to let have power! So utterly true, because it will become an entity unto its own! Great work with a wonderful cadence! sam
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sam444
on May 2, 2011 at 7:33 PM
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A lovely symphony of life you have posted here.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 2, 2011 at 11:48 AM
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Re: A life lived in "the key of grace..."
Thanks, Ciel. I know I shared this poem with you, long ago. I needed to re-read this poem, today, and so, I thought I would post it here.
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Gerontian
on May 2, 2011 at 11:14 AM
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A life lived in "the key of grace..."
I have always loved that phrase and all it says of you.
posted by
Ciel
on May 2, 2011 at 11:10 AM
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