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Re: And here I am in the midst of cornfields, unable to sleep...
Thank you teddy. But how did you get there,and do you make a habit of loafing among the wheat!? Watch outfor the circle makers, they could whisk you away like so much chaff in the wind! 
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 3, 2011 at 6:41 AM
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And here I am in the midst of cornfields, unable to sleep...
well done indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 3, 2011 at 1:51 AM
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Your comments, always compact, and if I may say so, strike a relevant note. Thank you Bill.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 3, 2011 at 1:19 AM
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% like the soul leaves the body and enters the imagery of your poem love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 2, 2011 at 8:19 PM
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Thank you,
Gerontian. I almost dropped off a couple of times, writing at around 1.30 am!
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 2, 2011 at 6:57 PM
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Thank you,
Annicita.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 2, 2011 at 6:46 PM
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ThanksJay. Cheers!
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 2, 2011 at 6:42 PM
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Thank you.
Poet prophetess.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 2, 2011 at 6:40 PM
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Wonderful poem...breath taking.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 2, 2011 at 11:52 AM
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Intoxicating, extremely evocative, I am not sure what words to say...the poem works on me at several levels, but is really a brilliant piece.
posted by
Gerontian
on May 2, 2011 at 9:35 AM
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nice
posted by
Annicita
on May 2, 2011 at 9:11 AM
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posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 2, 2011 at 8:22 AM
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