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this is sweet and moving,
you conjure the emptiness well.
posted by
Randir
on April 28, 2011 at 7:02 PM
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Re: sam444
That is entirely true and life is too short to spend longing for things that may come in time anyway
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:46 AM
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Re: lionreign
Absolutely, if a place is empty there is always the chance it may be filled
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:36 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thanks so much, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it xoxox
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:35 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you, I thought it was time to change the tone a little....
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:33 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley, fortunately that mood didn't last long
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:31 AM
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Re: that is very sweet and so in love...the unbearable feeling when one's love
thanks so much Kabu
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:29 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you, fortunately that mood is quite fleeting - I am much better at enjoying what is than at morning what isn't
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 8:26 AM
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Re: UtahJay
I'm glad you were able to connect with this... even if not for the circumstances that allow you to
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Re: poet_prophetess
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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My house feels this way at times now the children are grown! But it never really takes to long before the emptiness is filled with wholesome cheer! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 26, 2011 at 7:51 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on April 26, 2011 at 7:43 AM
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lionreign
w I get the sense of anticipation. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 25, 2011 at 9:35 PM
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What wonderful longing... You drew me in and allowed me to feel your want... Excellent work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 25, 2011 at 9:06 PM
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So lovely lionreign. Beautiful poem, so full of yearning.
posted by
shobana
on April 25, 2011 at 9:05 PM
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lionreign
Melancholy but so well done my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 25, 2011 at 3:23 PM
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that is very sweet and so in love...the unbearable feeling when one's love
is away.
posted by
Kabu
on April 25, 2011 at 2:07 PM
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Feels really sad, Lionreign. All that emptiness. Hope it won't be for too long before the return.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on April 25, 2011 at 12:30 PM
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When ever I'm home alone I feel this poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 25, 2011 at 10:21 AM
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posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 25, 2011 at 9:37 AM
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Very beautiful and powerful!
Thanks for your kind comment.
posted by
Nita09
on April 25, 2011 at 9:16 AM
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