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I like this metaphor for him.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 22, 2011 at 3:49 PM
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What a sterling idea to merge these! I thought it made it very poignant and such a stunning conclusion! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 22, 2011 at 2:24 PM
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I found this merged piece to be a wonderful poem, like I have said before, you have a way with words that I will miss. My new web-site should be finished next week and when it is I will leave Blogit, for there will be no time for both. I just wanted to thank you for all your kind remarks and our little back and fourths. I hope you enjoyed them as much as I did. I will miss your poetry, Raye, and I am happy I had the chance to read you...Have a meaningful Easter and may God bless you always.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 22, 2011 at 1:14 PM
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Excellence unbound, Dear Lady...fine work, Raye!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 21, 2011 at 11:08 PM
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lots of vivid imagery and passion Raye...
the merger of the two poems fits perfectly.
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posted by
Rumor
on April 21, 2011 at 7:03 PM
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full of promise, full of passion ...exquiste work. and the two are
perfect together. thank you....I really enjoyed reading.
posted by
Kabu
on April 21, 2011 at 4:52 PM
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