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Re: CUPLETS
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on April 28, 2011 at 12:38 PM
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Excellent. Good view. Not too close, phew!
posted by
CUPLETS
on April 27, 2011 at 7:49 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:31 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks Sam! I had a feeling that this might appeal...
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:28 AM
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Re: Well done...
Thanks teddy_poet
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:25 AM
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Re: lionreign
thanks Wiley, I guess i'll stay around for a long while yet
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:22 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on April 20, 2011 at 8:20 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you, I don't think I have ever seen one
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:19 AM
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Re: poet_prophetess
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:08 AM
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Re: Cheerygirl
I think you're right, but I have not succeeded in writing one yet
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:04 AM
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Re: or as has been said...Ships that passed in the night...well some times love
Sometimes it is and that is always a little sad, even if it is for the best
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
thank you! I was having a bleak day when I wrote this one
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 7:34 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on April 20, 2011 at 7:24 AM
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Since I am a big fan of the sky I loved this to no end! The voice of the poem being a comet speaks volumes! If I were a celestial body I would want to be a comet, too, they get around so to speak! Loved this one! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2011 at 3:40 AM
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Well done...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 19, 2011 at 10:31 PM
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lionreign
Comet or not I won't be glad your gone old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 19, 2011 at 10:03 PM
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I love catching a glimpse of the comet and all too soon they are gone..lovely poem lionreign.
posted by
shobana
on April 19, 2011 at 9:11 PM
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nice
posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 19, 2011 at 6:56 PM
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Interesting idea :) I think a shooting star would be a nice subject for a poem lionreign. Maybe you could consider that amongst the many great poems you write sometime maybe.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on April 19, 2011 at 12:20 PM
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or as has been said...Ships that passed in the night...well some times love
is short lived....not yours or mine with Wiley of course.
posted by
Kabu
on April 19, 2011 at 11:15 AM
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So sad Lion that I don't beleive it I am sure you could return with warmth.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 19, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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I get the metaphor and no one would be glad for that...good stuff and well worth the read.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 19, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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