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Skillfully written Bob. Expectation and reward just bubble out of this poem. The surf may hiss, but I`ll not
wave this one! 
Ps I hope the last verse kept It`s promise!!
posted by
CUPLETS
on April 20, 2011 at 8:02 PM
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Re: Re: Lion, I'll answer for the effort - it didn't start out as a story, but
oops! once I saw it heading that way, I really worked on it. - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 7:36 PM
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Re: Lion, I'll answer for the effort - it didn't start out as a story, but
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 7:34 PM
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Re: Sweet is the word, CC...
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 7:31 PM
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Re: Lots of good memories of summers gone by, Bob....
I WONDERED who was making all the noise!
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 7:29 PM
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Re: What fun summer love....but I was too smart to let 'em near me with the oil
Shucks.
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 7:28 PM
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Lots of good memories of summers gone by, Bob....
I smiled as I read your poem because I think Liz and I were just down the beach a bit from you...
...
posted by
Rumor
on April 19, 2011 at 5:12 PM
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Re: The mix, I think, was Coco Lopez. The rest was rum and
some kind of juice. It got called a lot of things, many unpronouncable, as you say.
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 12:17 PM
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What fun summer love....but I was too smart to let 'em near me with the oil
posted by
Kabu
on April 19, 2011 at 9:30 AM
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Yes quite sweet Bob those were the days
posted by
C_C_T
on April 19, 2011 at 8:37 AM
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I love that smell...reminds me of a drink I can't spell.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 19, 2011 at 8:17 AM
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It sounds like the day ended especially well
I love the style of this, you keep the tone anecdotal and yet still clearly good poetry
posted by
lionreign
on April 19, 2011 at 7:53 AM
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Re:...Like you couldn't imagine ...
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 6:02 AM
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Re: Sweet memories., - adnohR - bob
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 6:01 AM
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nice...
posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 19, 2011 at 3:32 AM
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Cute. Can't help but smile when I read this.
posted by
adnohr
on April 19, 2011 at 3:17 AM
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Re: Lucky dog...
Oh yeah.
posted by
2902
on April 19, 2011 at 2:20 AM
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Lucky dog...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 19, 2011 at 2:14 AM
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