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"the little mite" not sure what that is... must be something English or so me thinks!
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poet_prophetess
on April 18, 2011 at 9:11 AM
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Thank you Sam glad you thought so
posted by
C_C_T
on April 16, 2011 at 1:13 AM
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The end caught me off guard but like Taps said, very mesmerizing! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 15, 2011 at 6:58 PM
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You're too funny...many fairies were shipped out with the poms over 200 years ago. And then of course, for more than 45,000 years, Indigenous people have left signs of their occupation in Australia. Places where Aboriginal people have camped, lived and moved through, places associated with Dreaming stories depicting the laws of the land and how people should behave, places associated with their spirituality, places where laws have come into play to protect such places. My favourite such place is Mt. Warning, also known as Wollumbin, the easternmost point, it is the first place on mainland Australia to receive the sun’s rays each day, a magical place to write and play...Nice try though CC. Class dismissed Lol...SuZanne 
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 15, 2011 at 4:49 PM
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Well Jay I sometimes shed a tear, but tell no one.Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on April 15, 2011 at 11:55 AM
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Thank you Taps back to normal routine.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 15, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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Yes Lion it just came out in time. Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 15, 2011 at 11:52 AM
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Well PW after much consideration I have to admit I like Californian wine I know it is a weedy choice, and I hope a certain Australian lady does not read this. I find it much softer. I do occasionally quaff nectar, you see we have rather sophisticated fairies here. Everyone knows you only have gnomes ask anyone.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 15, 2011 at 11:51 AM
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Exhalent work CC, making poor Justi cry and all...beautiful poem my friend, you are truly a poet in every sense of the word.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 15, 2011 at 11:23 AM
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What a story. You have us all mesmerized.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 15, 2011 at 8:34 AM
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Lovely conclusion and a nice touch putting the pic of the plant in your journal
posted by
lionreign
on April 15, 2011 at 7:40 AM
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Hey CC, she loves her sherry, sure she's not Aussie? Emotional poetry and loved the ending. What's your poison? SuZanne x
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 15, 2011 at 3:00 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Shobana those roses rarely make a tree mostly bushes
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 11:11 PM
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Thank you FS nice comment
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 11:08 PM
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Thank you Troosha.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 11:06 PM
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Re: Oh My God what a story teller you are ..like of old....Kabu
Yes sit on my knee liitle girl Once upon time. Thank you Kabu.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 11:04 PM
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Re: a very surprising and emotional ending, C.C...
Yes thank you Rumor you know what it is like.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 11:02 PM
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Re: Truly beautiful writing and sentiments...
Ihankyou Ariala back to the grindstone,
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 11:00 PM
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Re: Justi
Thank you justi I did likewise.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2011 at 10:58 PM
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Wow, I just saw that yellow rose and they are gorgeous..so sad for Sarah. Lovely story CC.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2011 at 7:08 PM
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I like how the emotions kept getting more and more intense as the poem went onward.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 14, 2011 at 4:32 PM
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Take a bow. Bravo!
posted by
Troosha
on April 14, 2011 at 1:43 PM
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Oh My God what a story teller you are ..like of old....
posted by
Kabu
on April 14, 2011 at 1:19 PM
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a very surprising and emotional ending, C.C...
All in all, a very poignant write..
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posted by
Rumor
on April 14, 2011 at 11:38 AM
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Truly beautiful writing and sentiments...
posted by
Ariala
on April 14, 2011 at 11:15 AM
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That is the most beautiful thing. Now I am crying. Oh poor Sarah, I am so glad you came along to help her. That was all too much for her. Be blessed. I did not swe that coming.
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Justi
on April 14, 2011 at 10:43 AM
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