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Obviously worked hard on this poem. Touching, with beautiful metaphor.
posted by
CUPLETS
on April 18, 2011 at 4:15 PM
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Nothing like a good cry to cleanse away your woes, nice poem...SuZanne
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 14, 2011 at 3:46 AM
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Still alive then Lauren, a good poem glad that you blew the dust away.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 13, 2011 at 11:37 PM
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Love your style
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 13, 2011 at 10:32 PM
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Many interesting images here.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 13, 2011 at 8:56 PM
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GREAT POEM
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 13, 2011 at 4:46 PM
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Sometimes i write something and i am so happy with it....
reading it later...i wonder why.
posted by
Kabu
on April 13, 2011 at 4:35 PM
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