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Re: sam444
Thanks so much Sam
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:53 AM
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Re: psychicwarrior
Thanks SuZanne, glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:51 AM
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Re: lionreign
thanks Bill
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:45 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley... sorry to take you back though
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:44 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you! I think it's normal for those of us chained to an office
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:36 AM
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Re: I concur!!! thanks for your encouragement on staying around!
Thanks yammolia and I very much hope you do!
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:32 AM
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Re: Riversidepoet
There's nothing quite like it, is there?
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:23 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Thanks, this one was inspired by personal experience
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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Re: yes I love the evening especially after a really hot day
Oh gosh yes, especially when you have been stuck inside
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:16 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Oh yes... there's nothing like the freedom a the end of the day
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 8:15 AM
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Re: Cheerygirl
Thank you, this was inspired by being stuck in the office while the day looked beautiful outside
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 7:57 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you so much!
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Re: what a great contrast in the images between stanzas!
Thanks Rumor, glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on April 14, 2011 at 7:30 AM
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I loved the orchestra being in the heart; it has so many facets that the reader can play upon so to speak! It feels like a rebirth for that is what spring truly is! The lead up imagery was engaging and set the stage perfectly for the grand close too! Well done indeed and BRAVO! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 14, 2011 at 6:25 AM
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beautiful lionreign, a simple robot by day, I come alive at five too...SuZanne x
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 14, 2011 at 3:25 AM
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lionreign
k Spring and words flow. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 14, 2011 at 12:01 AM
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lionreign
You really brought me back to my working days and how the end of the day felt.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 13, 2011 at 8:24 PM
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This is lovely lionreign, you know most days I do the same..
posted by
shobana
on April 13, 2011 at 8:10 PM
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I concur!!! thanks for your encouragement on staying around!
posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 13, 2011 at 7:22 PM
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OH THE FEELING OF FREEDOM WALKING OUT OF A PLACE YOU DON'T WANT TO BE IN
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 13, 2011 at 5:05 PM
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The poor worker Lion I remember him well. Lovely example.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 13, 2011 at 11:32 AM
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yes I love the evening especially after a really hot day
posted by
Kabu
on April 13, 2011 at 11:22 AM
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The five o'clock blues come and night springs to life.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 13, 2011 at 11:04 AM
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I like the fact that he goes out to see what has happened outside at 5pm in the Spring time; after being confined to his office all day, to see the beauty God created everywhere in the Spring time because it is still day light at 5pm. Nice and uplifting. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on April 13, 2011 at 10:59 AM
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Very well written! Thanks for your visit: glad you liked the poem!
posted by
Nita09
on April 13, 2011 at 9:56 AM
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what a great contrast in the images between stanzas!
And you have switched them up so that day is drab and night is exciting...great plotting, lionreign..
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posted by
Rumor
on April 13, 2011 at 9:20 AM
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