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I like the who - who part it makes it auditory.
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Cheerygirl
on April 14, 2011 at 1:11 PM
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Hey Shobana, what can I say...I'm a cry baby
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 2:12 AM
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Thanks Sam appreciate your comment so much...SuZanne x
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 2:11 AM
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I get excited when I hear that...blessings to you UtahJay...SuZanne x
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 2:09 AM
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Re: Made me think......
Makes me think too Straightforward and wonder where the hell did that come from? SuZanne x
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 2:07 AM
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Cool, thanks lionreign, it can be ambiguous to me too, don't know where we are going sometimes, I stop and say...'what the?' and scratch my head...SuZanne
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 2:06 AM
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Well CC, some people do hunt them, also wild pigs, wild dogs and crocs! In fact, in some areas they are are menace! Especially when they ruin your crops or try and make you their next meal. We have every imaginable and some of the most poisonous creatures on earth here, oh the joy. But it is a great country, they don't call it the lucky country for no reason.
And thanks for your kind words...SuZanne x
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 2:03 AM
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Re: good poem!
Hello vammolia, haven't seen you before, thanks for stopping by...SuZanne
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 1:49 AM
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Re: very nice...mine today is about the wild, too!
Thanks Ariala, will check yours out too. SuZanne x
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 1:48 AM
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Thanks Chuck, it was very real to me at the time...I so hope I do have some talent but if nothing else I'm having a great time. SuZanne x
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psychicwarrior
on April 13, 2011 at 1:47 AM
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Fantastic poem Suzanne..this can be interpreted in so many ways of "who it might be"..
and don't cry -- it was only Elton beating out his numbers...
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shobana
on April 12, 2011 at 7:38 PM
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Who indeed! Wonderful imagery throughout! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 12, 2011 at 4:54 PM
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A thought inspiring piece written in a creative form that captivated me.
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UtahJay
on April 12, 2011 at 11:13 AM
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Made me think......
posted by
Straightforward
on April 12, 2011 at 10:15 AM
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Brilliant, you can interpret "him" in so many ways, I love your gift of ambiguity
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lionreign
on April 12, 2011 at 7:44 AM
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Well it wouldn't be a rabbit PW or a Kangaroo, I don't know much about Aussie hunting animals but I expect there are some little nasty one around. I quite like your work, it is thought provoking.
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C_C_T
on April 12, 2011 at 7:30 AM
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good poem!
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poet_prophetess
on April 12, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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very nice...mine today is about the wild, too!
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Ariala
on April 12, 2011 at 6:04 AM
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Love your poem. You make it sound like real. I think you have the talent
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Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 12, 2011 at 5:11 AM
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