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Aya, your first poem is exceptionally good....
Written like an experienced pro...well done!..
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posted by
Rumor
on April 12, 2011 at 3:48 PM
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This was even better on the second read; I want to get this in my mind; I am glad Aya liked my comment; these concepts can bring freedom to the insecure 
perfectionist, and are important things to keep in mind.
posted by
mariss9
on April 12, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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put's me to shame!
posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 11, 2011 at 10:07 PM
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I must say this is wonderful and the insight is well beyond the poetess' years! WOW! I adore it to no end! I see a little of her poetic father in here, too! Please extend my KUDOS to Aya, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 11, 2011 at 3:54 PM
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Awesome, just the way the drive for perfection seems when I read that!!
posted by
mariss9
on April 11, 2011 at 3:08 PM
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Way to go, Aya!!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on April 11, 2011 at 11:44 AM
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Yes Brill Chuck very cool man
posted by
C_C_T
on April 11, 2011 at 8:22 AM
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That's a first poem? I'm impressed, she has talent. I like her perspective too
posted by
lionreign
on April 11, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Well said.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 11, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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Purrfect Aya...Suzanne
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 11, 2011 at 2:53 AM
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How cleverly said chuck..just like the papa ;)
posted by
shobana
on April 11, 2011 at 12:16 AM
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