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I really liked the lilt of back-and-forth--until it became predictable measure. Maybe that's why poetry is so hard to write, because maybe we have to surprise ourselves with our own ideas before we can surprise a reader with surprisinf language. Hope this helps.
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jfm32
on April 9, 2011 at 3:18 PM
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