Go to C.C.
- Add a comment
- Go to SARAH
I agree with Taps, the details were so vibrant painting for us a lovely vignette.
posted by
Troosha
on April 9, 2011 at 12:10 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Well I shall have to go back I suppose Sam I sit with a bit of bun poised.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 9, 2011 at 8:34 AM
| link to this | reply
Like a movie in living color, your poem vividly shows me every detail.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 9, 2011 at 7:07 AM
| link to this | reply
Gripping
can't wait to read more
posted by
malcolm
on April 9, 2011 at 4:59 AM
| link to this | reply
Now that the revelation has come about, the next part should be very exciting to learn how he is taking this! I loved this one! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 8, 2011 at 11:33 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: great writing and i am thinking that if she believes that you are the one
Come on dearie what do you know about it. Sorry I didn't realise it was you Kabu.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:31 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
That is the trouble with you attractive guys Jay. I am only approached to solve problems.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:30 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: My friend it appears you have been chosen. Wonderful post!
Goodness Justi that was a quick assessment, Help
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:27 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
HM warrior I did not think anyone would mind, I deliberately said a nicer version of pee. I'll change it to having a smoke on the original ,
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:11 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Yes Wiley I am reluctantly cutting grass this morning it clogs the mower I have to be showered with clippings to keep it open
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:06 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: you've set up the perfect little cliffhanger here, C.C...
Help Rumor what is going to happen this is what I told you not to do.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:03 PM
| link to this | reply
CHIFFCHAFF
Beautifully said my friend and now enjoy your weekend old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 8, 2011 at 9:07 PM
| link to this | reply
Such the romantic, the one...ummm...next victim perhaps? Didn’t like the wee line though...sorry, probably the girl in me!
posted by
psychicwarrior
on April 8, 2011 at 7:44 PM
| link to this | reply
My friend it appears you have been chosen. Wonderful post!
posted by
Justi
on April 8, 2011 at 6:12 PM
| link to this | reply
great writing and i am thinking that if she believes that you are the one
perhaps it is possible that she is not the one for you.
posted by
Kabu
on April 8, 2011 at 5:14 PM
| link to this | reply
This is another of your best CC. This sort of thing happened to me once, my anticapation was so high when she asked me if I could help lay the new sod that I felt this must be the feeling that pilots get when shot out of the sky, and just before my plane hit the ground, why sure I said.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 8, 2011 at 2:20 PM
| link to this | reply
you've set up the perfect little cliffhanger here, C.C...
Invited to tea by a woman of mystery who just barely gets you in the door and tells you she thinks you are the one....hmmm, the one what??...be careful, C.C...tread softly, and if there are hose on the table legs, don't remove them..it could be a trap...Well done, as now we wait with baited breath for the continuation...
..
posted by
Rumor
on April 8, 2011 at 12:49 PM
| link to this | reply