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Re: who can prepare for fire and colour wrapped in a silken robe?
Thank you Rumor you are always so reassuring
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C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:24 PM
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Guess you are right Taps never mind, I don't worry any longer.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:22 PM
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No probs Lion I like comments it stokes my weary brain. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2011 at 11:19 PM
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Ones self-image is a difficult thing to balance.
It seems one levels off at too high or too low, and both cause us pain.
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TAPS.
on April 8, 2011 at 9:26 AM
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aaaah thank you, I misinterpreted slightly. One only has to read your poems to determine that you are not ordinary
posted by
lionreign
on April 8, 2011 at 8:10 AM
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who can prepare for fire and colour wrapped in a silken robe?
C.C., the answer is no one...its not that you're unworthy at all...maybe unsuspecting but not unworthy..
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Rumor
on April 8, 2011 at 6:57 AM
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Re: Whoa, tragedy...the ending is very strong and sad!
I don't think I have ever been nasty to you Ariala, so I can't be any nicer on this be nice day. Thank you. As my Uncle said 'Look that is my wife coming back from shopping, she has bandy legs. I wouldn't have married her if I had known.' Thank you for your comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:21 PM
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Well I always have to be nice to you Justi because you are a kind person.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:14 PM
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Goodness Shobana you are being nice as well it must be my new deodorant horse radish and garlic. Thank you so much
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:13 PM
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Well Jay one must let the poem speak especially if one is trying to rhyme.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:10 PM
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Re: Perhaps first love young love is not meant to last! beautiful poem Pops.
It is a be nice day Kabu Do you know any old Sheilas?
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:09 PM
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It's a sad realization to come to.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 7, 2011 at 12:08 PM
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Unworthy in many eyes Simone, but one gets over the problem Thank you.
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C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:07 PM
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Don't worry Sam it is my be nice days you could have done a lot worse. Humans are not predictable.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 12:04 PM
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Hi warrior I thought we would all have day running each other down. Now I have got to be nice to everyone.
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C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 11:59 AM
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Hi warrior I thought we would all have day running each other down. Now I have got to be nice to everyone.
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C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 11:59 AM
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Sorry Lion I just meant she did not sparkle and you have never met me,
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 11:57 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Yes alright Bill fill the air with love I don't mind.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
v Fill with roses and words sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 7, 2011 at 9:10 AM
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This feels very deep and somehow a touch jaded and disillusioned. Brilliantly written but I'd disagree - I have never yet met an ordinary person
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lionreign
on April 7, 2011 at 7:43 AM
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Self-image...now that’s a touchy subject. We are our harshest critic; am I good enough, could I have done it better, could I have done it differently, of course, but that moment has past like a scorched teardrop that evaporates before you can feel it escape down your cheek. We are all worthy and you my friend are no ordinary.
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psychicwarrior
on April 7, 2011 at 5:26 AM
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I wonder about the innocence of it all and as with the ending we ponder our worth! It is a fine poem with many nuances creating food for thought for I could take it to my own experiences and then ponder what may have been or what could have been done differently! sam
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sam444
on April 7, 2011 at 4:55 AM
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I totally agree with UtahJay... You are certainly not unworthy and she does not sound common or ordinary... Love is what it is my friend . Great poem xoxoxo
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Sinome
on April 6, 2011 at 8:45 PM
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Perhaps first love young love is not meant to last! beautiful poem Pops.
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Kabu
on April 6, 2011 at 7:58 PM
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Not unworthy CC maybe not just meant to be..you write beautiful poetry my friend.
posted by
shobana
on April 6, 2011 at 7:39 PM
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Oh I am with Utah Jay... You are a very worthy one and a writer of wonderful poetry.
posted by
Justi
on April 6, 2011 at 12:40 PM
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Oh CC I cannot see her as ordinary, nor you Sir as unworthy. Anyone who can write as lovely a poem as this, is certainly not unworthy.
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UtahJay
on April 6, 2011 at 12:34 PM
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Whoa, tragedy...the ending is very strong and sad!
posted by
Ariala
on April 6, 2011 at 12:10 PM
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