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Re: Yes, there are those moments, aren't there! - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 7, 2011 at 4:11 AM
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I know the feeling of finding something that is safe, like a car! I really enjoyed your imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 7, 2011 at 3:38 AM
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Re:I definitely felt like an outsider, Juliah. - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 7, 2011 at 12:57 AM
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This is so nice - the image of trees talking to one another - I love it.
posted by
juliah
on April 6, 2011 at 11:00 PM
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Re: nice one....I have had that feeling at times.....intruding on nature
Right! At such times I feel shut out. And, of course, I am. - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 6, 2011 at 9:52 PM
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Re: CC, you of all, I would have wanted there!
posted by
2902
on April 6, 2011 at 9:50 PM
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Re: You know what it's like, Jay. You can't just plan those moments.
posted by
2902
on April 6, 2011 at 9:49 PM
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nice one....I have had that feeling at times.....intruding on nature
posted by
Kabu
on April 6, 2011 at 7:13 PM
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Very good Bob it is nice to visit somewhere like that and not have to expend the effort. I would have waited in your car. Nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on April 6, 2011 at 12:30 PM
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I too have been in those places that feel sacred and one feels out of place there...I love the style in which you wrote this.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 6, 2011 at 7:00 AM
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John, I can tell: you've been there, too! - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 6, 2011 at 5:40 AM
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It`s a secret,but I went with you on that walk. Wonderful cadence, images and choice of words. There is an
old world feel about it. I particularly liked the second to last section, a trinity of communication, oh dear, I
don`t want that to sound religious!! Ha!
posted by
CUPLETS
on April 6, 2011 at 4:54 AM
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