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Re:Remarkable! You packed so much keen reflection into those lines!
Reminds me what metaphors can do!!!
posted by
2902
on April 5, 2011 at 6:23 AM
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EXELLENT!
I love the way you have so much meaning distilled into these three lines, haiku-like...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 5, 2011 at 3:51 AM
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i love your poetry - so simple yet meaningful.
posted by
juliah
on April 5, 2011 at 12:55 AM
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