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Hey there Mister BC-A

Interesting that you picked up the 'secret'

...for the secret is

        there is no secret...SuZanne

posted by psychicwarrior on April 4, 2011 at 5:38 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks Shobana, I see we have something in common...I am in employment services too.

Regards, SuZanne

posted by psychicwarrior on April 4, 2011 at 4:36 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks Sam, never been involved in a blog before and I'm learning my way, so please bear with me while I figure it all out...Cheers, SuZanne

 

posted by psychicwarrior on April 4, 2011 at 4:34 AM | link to this | reply

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Hey there UtahJay, thank you for your feedback.  Being a novice (dare I say Poet) I appreciate your comment very much.  Don't really know if I can write, all I know is I love to write...breath...ummm...

posted by psychicwarrior on April 4, 2011 at 4:31 AM | link to this | reply

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Hey there Chiffchaffe, it's true, I have been there and I am ever so grateful. A whimsical place I cannot wait to return.

posted by psychicwarrior on April 4, 2011 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you for stopping by my blog psychicwarrior and welcome to blogit.

posted by shobana on April 3, 2011 at 10:34 PM | link to this | reply

I thought the close was superb! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 3, 2011 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

The ebb and tide made this poem breath I thought.

posted by UtahJay on April 3, 2011 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

You have been there and it glows in the words well done.

posted by C_C_T on April 3, 2011 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

v And yet your use of imagery and contrast seek out your blinded secret in this. It gives an unusual bright mysterious mood. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 3, 2011 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: your comment is so very welcome...

Thank you so much Shobana, I have just joined today and still finding my way and you are my very first response.

 

posted by psychicwarrior on April 3, 2011 at 3:06 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem.

posted by shobana on April 3, 2011 at 2:42 AM | link to this | reply