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The last line was so good but I treasure this one:
I need the power that would to solve all of my fears. I so need to do this! I have thought many a time of e-mailing you about the deployment but I like to keep my friends and not drag them down with my worries and thank you for thinking of me though! sam 
posted by
sam444
on April 3, 2011 at 9:28 PM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Not if she eats turnips Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 1:06 PM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Only a fantasy Wiley I am not a true one.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 1:05 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
' She’s eating the profits sir. Lol. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 2, 2011 at 11:11 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Great poem and thanks for swingin' on the high bar in my comments in my blog.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 2, 2011 at 10:25 AM
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ah yes, the thoughts and fantasies of the girl behind the counter....
C.C...you have the uncanny ability to put yourself into other peoples shoes...very whimsical.
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posted by
Rumor
on April 2, 2011 at 7:14 AM
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Well we were all girls once Simone. Sorry I have got that wrong. Never mind, I suspect we will all be the same one day. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 1:09 AM
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Well John I am basically lazy if I were a young man like you and had a good pension which I hope you will have one day and it wont be enough. I would sit in my attic and feel inspired.
Really one wants to be a young man to write poetry and then cop out. This gives everyone the chance to say if only he had lived what a wonder we would have enjoyed. I wonder.
What's next John If I can outlive you and stagger on for thirty years, I will let you know, oblivion I expect, I promise not to haunt you.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 1:05 AM
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Re: Nectar - Next time I go to Macy's I shall choose my salesgirl more
Hmm I don't think that will work Bob
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 12:48 AM
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Re: My comment as a lady i better not write.
Well don't be silly Kabu I want to know the nitty gritty how can one write about things one does not understand think of me as your doctor.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 12:46 AM
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Up to you FS
posted by
C_C_T
on April 2, 2011 at 12:44 AM
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I loved how you got into this girls mind... Great poem! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 1, 2011 at 10:17 PM
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I wouldn't srop drinking over this one, but I think this is one of your best, and perhaps everything you might have been working for--to get inside something very simple and project it into something bigger, while it remains exactly what it is. I always had this feeling about your writing because you always seemed to be writing, or circling around something. This one is different and seem to approach a new begininng, and a perspective even you might have been waiting for. Other than that, I find herein, a revolution of form and re-understanding. so what's next?
posted by
jfm32
on April 1, 2011 at 7:18 PM
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Nectar - Next time I go to Macy's I shall choose my salesgirl more
carefully. - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 1, 2011 at 7:07 PM
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My comment as a lady i better not write.
posted by
Kabu
on April 1, 2011 at 1:23 PM
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She has lots of dreams. I wonder if they will become reality.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 1, 2011 at 1:08 PM
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