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Re: You are a mess
Hello Justi thank you for reading,
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C_C_T
on April 1, 2011 at 12:52 PM
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Well Sam I don't know that much about women, I'll take your word for it.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 1, 2011 at 12:50 PM
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Thank you Sir
posted by
C_C_T
on April 1, 2011 at 12:48 PM
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You are a mess
You tell us about you so very well. This was a terrfic piece of wordsmithing. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on April 1, 2011 at 4:34 AM
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I snickered when I read 'I was disappointed when I turned on the light"; I don't why but I did! For a while during the course of the poem I really thought the voice could me recollecting in his head or dreaming of a sort; then at the end the prompt to eat bun changed it! And when it did, I ponder why the heck he didn't include a slap or two for I think the gal would have taken issue with a couple of thoughts! Well done and I got a kick out of reading it, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 31, 2011 at 5:22 PM
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AGAIN A WAY WITH WORDS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 31, 2011 at 11:32 AM
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Shobana cream buns are for fictional ladies please observe
posted by
C_C_T
on March 31, 2011 at 8:55 AM
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Jay well she is everywhere sometimes and never seen at others. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on March 31, 2011 at 12:04 AM
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Re: Hi C.C. another great read from the master....thanks
Thank you madam may all your promlems be little ones.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 31, 2011 at 12:02 AM
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Re: C.C. ...you've created a real, living, breathing woman....
No don't put her in as a vampire Rumor she thinks eating a cream bun is pretty daring.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 31, 2011 at 12:01 AM
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Hm, business like yeh,
posted by
C_C_T
on March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Sugar bun
posted by
C_C_T
on March 30, 2011 at 11:59 PM
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Wow CC, very inviting poem..Excellent job.
posted by
shobana
on March 30, 2011 at 7:51 PM
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C.C. ...you've created a real, living, breathing woman....
You (she) touches all the senses, in a nice way..I could put her in a story (and no, not as a vampire..:).
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posted by
Rumor
on March 30, 2011 at 5:31 PM
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Hi C.C. another great read from the master....thanks
posted by
Kabu
on March 30, 2011 at 4:11 PM
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So as I'm reading this and she will mess her lips, you love her hands, you stroke her hair and no one will know and then you say goodnight to go dig in your garden I'm assuming after dark...just who is this girl CC, and where do you have her? lol I loved the way you ended with your last line.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 30, 2011 at 1:29 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Rw Sweetness that you can feel sir! Lol. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
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BC-A
on March 30, 2011 at 1:15 PM
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