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passionate and sensuos like slowly making love with one's beloved
very well written.

posted by Kabu on March 29, 2011 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

I adore how you bring grace to sensuality! A remarkable gift indeed! Thank you for your comment on my blog, in my heart I know you are right, it's just getting my mind to catch up! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 29, 2011 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

I don't know what you are grumbling about Chuck she sounds pretty good to me. Nice poem.

posted by C_C_T on March 29, 2011 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

I like the repeating lines at the end, I feel they add a nice touch.

posted by UtahJay on March 29, 2011 at 12:46 AM | link to this | reply