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posted by
Annicita
on March 28, 2011 at 8:25 PM
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Outstanding! Longing can be so difficult but this is superb imagery throughout! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 27, 2011 at 9:49 PM
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GREAT POEM
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 27, 2011 at 8:31 PM
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Lovely poem chuck.
posted by
shobana
on March 26, 2011 at 10:19 PM
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chuck
I feel this poem Chuck. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 26, 2011 at 8:52 PM
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I suppose that is why i wore myself out staying long hours at the hospital
with Wiley....we can't stand not to be together.
posted by
Kabu
on March 26, 2011 at 1:47 PM
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This reminds me of my divorce so many years ago, but the feelings are the same, cold, irksome and alone.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 26, 2011 at 9:39 AM
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the agonies of separation from the one we love....
You've captured them well, chuck....the "coldness" itself is a powerful metaphor.
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posted by
Rumor
on March 26, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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Perhaps you should have gone with her Chuck, she seems too good to lose.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 26, 2011 at 12:56 AM
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